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Friday, 28 March 2014

The Kidnap Of A Family

He didn’t like our son, because we paid more attention to the baby than him. He tried to kill him and when we were trying to protect the baby. He maddened, tried to kill us. We locked ourselves in a room, and call the police. Then, he was detained. Even though we still love the cat. 



4 comments:

  1. So good! I didn't expect the problem was the cat! Irony of course and attractive story.

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  2. So good! I really love the last sentence! Well done!
    Rocío Corrales.

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  3. Really funny, i was thinks while reading who was the person who want to kill them, i never imagined it was the cat.
    Very goos.

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  4. Great unexpected ending! Well done!

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